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SPOILER:

First of all, I want to say in advance that this episode is the highlight of all events. the epsidoes to come are just conclusions.

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The setting is a crowded wooded area.
Suddenly a silouhette crosses the scene swiftly, followed by another silouhette, moving slower.

Two sets of feet scarmble across the ground, once again, followe dby a third set.

The first too sets appear to be Right and Yellow, running through the woods in sheer panic and horror, looking back.

Behind them walks a hooded figure.

Right and Yellow are obviously running away from that figure. Yellow is in tears.

Suddenly the hooded figure whips out a gun and starts firing at them. The shots narrowly miss the two.


We leave the scene at that and go back one hour in time.

Kevin is sitting on his bed, crying, looking at a picture of him and Yellow when they were still together. He is in deep pain.
He gets up off the bed and tosses the pictureframe to the floor.

A while later, a hand reaches insie a drawer, and pulls out a gun. It is held by a hooded figure.


...5 minutes to midnight, Yellow and Right are walking on te fringes of the city, after a wonderful night out together. Right is smiling and Yellow is giggling.
They look at each toher and kiss. The hooded figure is watching form the bushes. Holding his gun, the figure jumps out form the bushes. Right and Yellow notice the gun and panic. Right pulls Yellow quickly into the woods.

Back to the beginning-

Yellow and Kevin run from the hooded charecter, as he fires sots at them, narrowly missing them.

Yellow, scared by what might happen next, tells Right once again that she loves him. Right answers to her that he lvoes her too, and that he's sorry. Yellow ants to answer, but she can't speak. both because they are running, and because she is lost for words.

Suddenly Yellow trips over a tree branch and falls down. Right stops in his tracks and helps her up. he helps carry her on. Yellow's leg is obviously hurt from the fall, so they are moving slower than before.

They reach a clearing int he woods, and try to run up a ill, hoping to get a better view from above as to wehre they can go. however, as they get to the top of hte hill, the hooded charecter fires one last shot at the two.

Someone is hit.


They both fall to the ground.


Yellow rises up fromt he ground, and looks at Right, who is lying next ot her immobile. She beigns to scream, cry, and mourn over him, ignoring the fact that the hooded charecter is still close by.


However, the hooded charecter does not shoot at Yellow, isntead, he just stands there. head leaned forward, and tears running down his cheeks. When suddenly... two braids fall out from under the hoodie... Apparantly hte hooded charecter is Becky...






...Later, the police and an ambulance arrive. Becky is taken under arrest, and Right is rushed to the hospital.
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:iconcic-studios:
CIC-Studios Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Wow,this seems so interesting!o.o I really like how everything was put together and the music fits it well!~:heart:
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:iconneotomi:
Neotomi Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012
Thank you very much :)
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CIC-Studios Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Professional Filmographer
You're very welcome!!!!!~:heart:
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Coma-Trust Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2010
How often does that gun need to be reloaded?
She seriously like shoots 12ish times without reloading, no hand guns do that.
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:iconneotomi:
Neotomi Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2010
Well, if you have to be such a spoilsport about it, she never does shoot more than 6 in a row. There's no reason why she couldn't be reloaidng when she's not onscreen.

The most she shoots in a row is 4(or 6, depending how you look at it from a time perspective), I'm sure there are plenty of guns that can do that.
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Coma-Trust Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2010
But you cant reload one of those guns that quick...

*curses father for teaching her about fire arms*
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:iconneotomi:
Neotomi Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2010
"That quick"? There's like two whole minutes between the 4 or 6 shots that she fires at them as they enter the park and the one shot she fires at them when they're on the hill. That's enough time, even if you don't take into consideration that hti sis an EDITED video, and therefore there's obviously time skips.
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Coma-Trust Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2010
no no there is a section in the middle where she fires 5ish bullets and then fires another couple from a completely different angle just before the squirrel things start talking.
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:iconneotomi:
Neotomi Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2010
Hmmm? I counted.
She fires 4 bullets. Then the camera changes angle and you see two bullets passing the characters ("squirrel things"? -_-). Overall 6 shots, and that's even if you don't ocnsider the two bullets passing the characters to be two of the bullets that you already saw Becky frie.
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:iconcoma-trust:
Coma-Trust Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2010
I counted 5, but i suppose you the animator you know more than I do.
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:iconneotomi:
Neotomi Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2010
Again, even if there's 5, the movie is edited. It doesn't show everything in real time. Otherwise it would've taken them alot longer to walk up that hill.


And there are never more than 6 gunshots in one movie shot.
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annekaretnikov Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
aww, I love this song. Cool!

This seems like a animated storyboard though, are you going to be doing a finished version?
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:iconneotomi:
Neotomi Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2009
no... I eplained fof the bat why not. It would take a whole disney crew, an insane amount of time and budget to do these things properly.
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annekaretnikov Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
Really? I'm sorry, I'm just a big animation fan, so I'm wondering about this.

I mean, there are some amazing flash things out there- ever seen any of the Bitey's Castle works, for instance? I had trouble convincing people that they're even done in flash. Most of those stories are just done by one person...

I'm just wondering if these couldn't be a lot more finished- they look more like the animated storyboards? Maybe at least a few segments?
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:iconneotomi:
Neotomi Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2009
The Bitey animations are considered some of the most amazing animations ont he web, they were done by a proffessional, plus, it still takes like a year to make each one, My series has 12 parts, not including gags, so that would mean about 12 years to make the entire series...
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:iconannekaretnikov:
annekaretnikov Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
Ah, well, that makes sense. Though he does have some pretty good shorts in full color : )
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Ash-Felix-Forecer Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2008
I can't tell you how many times I've watched this.
But everytime I still get a shiver up my spine, and bumps on my arm when thier in the open field.
<3
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:iconneotomi:
Neotomi Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2008
Oh wow, thank you! ^_^ I am relaly glad you liked it so much
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:iconfrazeocity:
frazeocity Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2008
No matter how many times I watch this, I still get a little shiver at the end.
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:iconneotomi:
Neotomi Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2008
I'm glad to hear :)


By the way,w hat is that in your avatar?
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:iconfrazeocity:
frazeocity Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2008
Oh, it's a small image of one of my origami pieces: [link]
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Kitykat12211 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
DEFINATLY not expecting the end o.0
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mad-about-Usuls Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2008
NO!!!!RIGHT WAS COOL!!RIGHT PLEASE DON'T DIE!!!
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:iconlizachan:
LizaChan Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2007
SHEESH, QUIT MAKING MY BLOOD PRESSURE HIGH!!!11!!
Sorry.
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:iconbunniesr4eva:
bunniesr4eva Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2007   Writer
noooOOO!! T^T
how could it be becky?!
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:iconkykat:
KyKat Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2007
Sad. T.T But what I love about this video is how well you timed the music with the animation...and how you made Becky's braids fall out. ^^"
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:iconneotomi:
Neotomi Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2007
Thank you ^^
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:iconrefia-chan:
Refia-Chan Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2007   General Artist
Aww... a sad video...T,T I favorite this. *click fave button* Anyway, I LOVE THAT SONG!!! Moonlight Shadow. X3 My favorite part was when the girl wok up to find the other person dead.
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:iconneotomi:
Neotomi Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2007
Thanks :)
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kittycat299 Featured By Owner May 23, 2007
OMG!!!! NOOOooooo!!! IT CAN'T END LIKE THIS!!! NEVA!!!!! I HATE SAD ENDINGS!!! >_<
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Invaderbubblegum Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2007   Writer
oh no`s what happend to becky???? after she killed right did she get cought OMG TELL ME!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconnassa12321:
nassa12321 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2007
curse you becky
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:iconkalila307:
Kalila307 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2007   Digital Artist
Who sings the song?
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:iconneotomi:
Neotomi Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2007
Groove Coverage
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:iconkalila307:
Kalila307 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2007   Digital Artist
huh? ...X)
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:iconneotomi:
Neotomi Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2007
thats the name of the band
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:iconkalila307:
Kalila307 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2007   Digital Artist
ohhhhh... thanks! XD
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:iconkalila307:
Kalila307 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2007   Digital Artist
omg! the best thing ever!
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SummersBlossom Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
he he If you wanted to be technical Yellow would have been hurt :paranoid: cause the force of a bullet goin past would break her bones :lol: but movies often screw that whole concept lol like the matrix. XD hope you don't mind me saying I just find it kinda cool
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Neotomi Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2007
of course thats not ture, a bullet going two feet to your right wouldnt hurt you, itd have to come insanely close to your skin to even slice it, so lets not get started about breaking bones
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SummersBlossom Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD ok
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chaosfrancis Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2007
why does kevin girl wana kill yellows girl?
i hope thats what happind
im not that sure
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:iconneotomi:
Neotomi Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2007
Kevin doesnt wnana kill anyone, and Yellow doesnt have a "girl", she has a BOYfriend.
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:iconchaosfrancis:
chaosfrancis Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2007
sorry wasint thinking :P
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:iconchaosfrancis:
chaosfrancis Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2007
oh right sorry i just read
PirateGirlRulz
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Lulu78628 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2007
What is the name of the pwnful song? oWo Good job, though. Love the suspence.
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:iconneotomi:
Neotomi Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2007
Groove coverage - Moonlight shadow
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jioelromero Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2007
I was gonna ask that too!Becky broke Yellows heart T_T
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:iconneotomi:
Neotomi Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2007
She wanted to hurt Yellow the same way Yellow Hurt Kevin, so instead of just killing her she'd put her through emotional turmoil.
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PirateGirlRulz Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2007
Why did Becky shot Right but not Yellow?
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