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Neopia Central County hospital:
Yellow sits by a hospital bed, Right lays unconcious in it, hooked up to machines. Yellow is crying and her face shows that she has been crying for a while now.

scene changes to Neopia's moon.

Right's spirit seems to sit on the barren landscape, watching over Neopia, untill Neopia casts a shadow that engulfs right, and he dissappears.

Back in the hospital

Right's spirit appears behind Yellow, his expression is unclear. He talks to yellow, but Yellow can't hear him.
At some point Right fades away.

He reappears in a very dark place. nothing in sight.
Suddenly, shadowy silouhettes fly above him. Right looks at them scared, One of the silouhettes swoops down and scratches his face. Right is in pain, but looks on.


Hospital room

Yellow dotingly stays by Right's side, holding his hand. constantly in tears. Right's spirit reappears and beings tlaking to Yellow again, looking backa t the things that happened in an amused and loving frame of mind. but suddenly his loving face directed at yellow turns to horror when he relaizes he's fading away again.

He reappear sint he darkness and sees the flock of dark, bat-like silouhettes flying towards him, he tries to run away but gets hit several times.

By now Yellow can't hold it in any longer and bursts into a fit of tears and wails. Yet at the same time Right finds strength to get back up on his feet.

Yellow, shaking and broken down, looks up, and suddenly finds herself in the darkness, standing in front of right.
The silouhttes circle them both.

Yellow looks at Right in a storm of emotions, not sure if it's relalyhim or not,where are they, or what has happened to Right's face.

Right talks to Yellow agiann, this time she hears every word. He wlaks closer to her. Yellow puts hert hand on right's cheek and hte ohter way around, and they both smile excited. tears in their eyes.

Suddenly the shadows close in on them, and whisk Right away, Yellow chasing him screaming in terror.
Right, frightened, tries to break loose of their grip, but to no avail.
Suddenly Yellow wakes up, she was either sleep or passed out on Right's lap on the hospital bed. Se looks at Right and is horrified to see that he's twitching and squirming. Terrified, she leaps to the door and screams for a doctor. A doctor and a nurse happen to be standing nearby and jump intot e room. Right's spirit is negujlfed in silouhettes.
The doctor and nurse start prepping Right for operation. Yellow is in sheer panic. The nurse pushes her out of the room and closes trhe door and blinds behind her. Yellow keeps looking in the window anyhow.
Righ's spirit drowns in the shadows and silouhettes.

Beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eep.

Right flatlines.
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:iconsonamyfan7864:
sonamyfan7864 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2011
how do u make animations?
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:iconneotomi:
Neotomi Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2011
In a program called Flash
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:iconsonamyfan7864:
sonamyfan7864 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2011
ok
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:iconalex999139:
Alex999139 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2010
Ooh, another song I recognize. "If I'm alive and well, will you be there holding my hand?" For some reason, explicitly contrary to the lyrics, whenever I heard that line, I always pictured a girl comforting a badly injured boyfriend in a hospital. So then I watch this video, and I think you must be psychic or something.

... What are you saying about "Groove Coverage" and "Moonlight Shadow"? I'm hearing nothing but Kryptonite.
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:iconnatthewriter:
NatTheWriter Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2009
This makes me want to cry. >:
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:iconneopespyro45:
neopespyro45 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2008
what song?
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:iconneopespyro45:
neopespyro45 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2008
what song?
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:iconneotomi:
Neotomi Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2008
Groove coverage - moonlight shadow
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:iconcaramelldansensharp:
CaramellDansenSharp Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2008
what's the song? :thumb46021351:
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:iconneotomi:
Neotomi Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2008
3 doors down - Kryptonite
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:iconcaramelldansensharp:
CaramellDansenSharp Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2008
thanks
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:iconmad-about-usuls:
mad-about-Usuls Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2008
*cries*WHY??THAT BETTY!!I HATE HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconneotomi:
Neotomi Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2008
Becky. Betty's the alien
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:iconmad-about-usuls:
mad-about-Usuls Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2008
oh yea...sorry hehe
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:iconspring13:
spring13 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2007
Omigod. That was sad. D:
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:icondoings:
doings Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2007
NOOO! DAMN YOU BECKY!
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:iconnatalathefox:
natalathefox Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2007
....reminds me of someone I used to know....
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:iconneotomi:
Neotomi Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2007
oh?
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:iconkykat:
KyKat Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2007
What's this song called and who's it by? I can't remember...
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:iconeswerelupe:
ESWerelupe Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2007
Kriptonite...

it think. By the Kill?


This is very sad =/ What do you use to animate?
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:iconneotomi:
Neotomi Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2007
Groove coverage - moonlight shadow
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:iconkykat:
KyKat Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2007
Wow!! That was great animation! I've always tried to animate with Macromedia Flash but I suck at it. XD
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:iconneotomi:
Neotomi Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2007
you dont have to make animations, you can make slideshows with music like i made
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:iconkykat:
KyKat Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2007
Well, I meant the way you move up the buildings and circle around with those grey things. That was awesome.
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:iconneotomi:
Neotomi Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2007
thanks though that is relaly relaoy simple. i could even tlel you how tod ot hat over IM
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:iconkykat:
KyKat Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2007
Cool, do you mean Yahoo! IM? Or something totally different?
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:iconneotomi:
Neotomi Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2007
I dont have yahoo, I meant AIM or MSN or ICQ
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:iconkykat:
KyKat Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2007
I only have Yahoo.
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:iconrefia-chan:
Refia-Chan Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2007   General Artist
Awesome! ^^ Yet again, VERY good video! :D :thumbsup::thumbsup:
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:iconneotomi:
Neotomi Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2007
thanks :)
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:iconrefia-chan:
Refia-Chan Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2007   General Artist
:( Awww, that's such a cute video...*clicks fave button* These animations are so good, they actually tell a story that plunges me into the video, it makes me feel like I'm n the movie. Great job! :D BTW, I LOVE that song! what's it called?
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:iconneotomi:
Neotomi Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2007
3 doors down - Kryptonite (or alternatively, superman)
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:iconmrswizzard:
MrsWizzard Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2007
That made me cry ;_; excellent animation ^^
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:iconneotomi:
Neotomi Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2007
Thanks ^^ I love it when I can amke animations that can make people cry.

As long as it's a good sorta cry.
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:iconkittycat299:
kittycat299 Featured By Owner May 23, 2007
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! HE CAN'T DIE!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! *cries out loud*
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:icononyxkgem:
OnyxKGem Featured By Owner May 19, 2007
NO! Right's dead! Becky is just soo very bad. :disbelief:
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:iconchaosfrancis:
chaosfrancis Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2007
i know what the bat like thingies are - life and death - right?
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:iconneotomi:
Neotomi Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2007
Its open for interpertation. Im not that sure myself.
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:iconchaosfrancis:
chaosfrancis Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2007
cool
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:iconkalila307:
Kalila307 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2007   Digital Artist
crap... he died... -_-
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:iconkomiks:
komiks Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2007
ohhhhh thats cool
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:iconneotomi:
Neotomi Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2007
thanks :)
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:iconkalina-10:
kalina-10 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2007
the suspense is like, BUILDING.
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:iconkalina-10:
kalina-10 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2007
the suspense is like, BUILDING.
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:iconkalina-10:
kalina-10 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2007
I know this is reeeally off topic, but when Right is unconcious in the hospital bed, he sorta looks like Kevin, without his bandana. ^_^
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:iconjioelromero:
jioelromero Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2007
Nice Work,Tomi!It was so sad it made me cry(a little) too!
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:iconkalina-10:
kalina-10 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2007
sent shivers down my spine. nice job.
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:iconneotomi:
Neotomi Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2007
Thanks ^_^
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:iconnoglogtog:
Noglogtog Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2007  Student Filmographer
What is that song called? D:
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:iconneotomi:
Neotomi Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2007
Three doors down - Kryptonite

or

3 doors down - superman

or a combination of the two
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